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hey you guys here's another song i have that's about will,but the first part is about like a guy that treated you bad or whatever lol:

"Heaven With Fire"

sometimes when i am sleeping,
i know that i am dreaming.
you dont even know my name,
but you still think love is a game.

there was an angel,that cast me on this throne.
i know that you are here but i dont feel alone.
when you came to see me,i threw you back again.
that angel is my protection,from every tear that i shed.

CHORUS:
heaven with fire!it is my true desire!i was cast out of this place,from my own disgrace.but the angel,he will protect me.no matter how much you reject me!i will always say his name loud and clear:William,are you here?
VERSE 2:
all this time,you knew about us,
i saw your look of disgust.
but when i said hello,
you made me seem so shallow!
the angel is back with me,
no matter how much he wants to be free.
he will be my shield and sword,
it feels like im winning an award!

(CHORUS)

the angel(the angel),has come to my rescue.
i forgave him(forgave him),but i don't know what else to do.
the sun in my eyes(in my eyes),it gave me a suprise.
i want the angel(the angel)....but not YOU!

(CHORUS)


so,what do you think?

oh and here's another one im making right now as i post this lol

"Hear Me"

can you hear me?
can you see me?
i just want to be alone.

im moving on without you,
i might talk about you,
every now and again.

1ST OFFICIAL VERSE:
(whispered:give your heart to jesus)
take away the pain that it holds.
(whispered:give him all your freedom)
you don't want to be alone.
shouted:
when i was crying,i was dying!
dying for you!(dying for you)
crying,flying...
crying for YOU!

CHORUS:
all i wanted,was for you to hear me!i wanted you to see me,but it wasnt possible.you took away my heart,you took away my soul!you were the only thing that could have made me whole!but now im lost in the shadows of the night,watching people waste their time.

VERSE 2:
all these things im saying,
all these paintings im creating,
are just for you to memorize.

you think my heart was broken?
well,look who has spoken!
im getting beaten up inside.

i just wanna fly away,
to the nearest cloud.
shouldnt be too quiet,
shouldnt be too loud.

CHORUS #2:
im watching my own dreams fade away,that wasnt what was supposed to happen!you think im liking traveling far to the end?well,all that was compared to you...is just a lie.

(CHORUS)

all this time,you were hearing me?
all this time you were seeing me?
god,why didn't you tell me?

i thought you said i was missunderstood,
living underneath your car hood,
that was a promise.

i think i've lost it,
you were supposed to deny it,
but that was the end.

this is the beginning,
your brand new spinning,
going all up inside.

you turned around to face the past,
but all you saw was the grass...
suddenly fading.

(CHORUS)

living up inside(livin' deep in time)
is all that i ever wanted(you're all that i ever wanted)
forgive me,my reasons are unexplainable.
but now is the time for them to end!

(CHORUS #2)

(FIRST CHORUS'S END VERSE 4x)

spoken:
watching you waste your life.


so what do you think?it doesnt seem to be related to will lol but i just sorta felt down and moody,this was what i was feeling.it took half an hour to make,but tell me how you like it!

i love then! you are so talented!

thanks!

yeah! i LOVE ur songs!!! u r super talented!

i like them, too!! there awsome! i would never b able to do that.

^^^same here^^^

thanks a bunch,you guys!omg in the past 5 hours,i wrote 13 really deep songs!awesome!

well post em girl!! i wanna read em
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i just wrote this song..but i dont really like it...


I Need You

Loneliness envelopes me
I feel so cold, so cold
Creating a paradox, setting up barriers

I need you, I feel you here
Warm my heart of stone
Keep me safe, protect me always
I need you so much, come to me

Trapped in an eternal snow
So bitter, so cold
Ice shatters my heart
Only you can repair it

I need you, I feel you here
Warm my heart of stone
Keep me safe, protect me always
I need you so much, come to me

All I need is your touch
Complete me
Together we can fly away from here
Never come back
All I need is you

I need you, I feel you here
Warm my heart of stone
Keep me safe, protect me always
I need you so much, come to me

Pain, searing pain
My heart aches for you, only you
Yet you do not know it
Give it back, it is vital

I need you, I feel you here
Warm my heart of stone
Keep me safe, protect me always
I need you so much, come to me



Edité par will4ever le 24/04/2006 à 02:18

omg that's awesome!ok here are my other songs:

"Come On,Baby"

Do you really love me?
Cuz I know I love you
What will it take to make you see
That I am not your enemy

All this time you were playing games
Calling my number
Saying my name
But all that is behind us,it's only you and I

CHORUS:
Feel my heart and soul.
Come on,baby,you're the one who broke it.
All this love is burning up my soul
You can't even make me whole!(make me whole)

The time has come to end this now
I don't know why
I don't know how
But please,can't we at least just be friends?

Look at me,I know you love me
But you need to let me know you really do
All this time we were soul mates
But then you left me behind

Someone let me inside
It's pouring rain in my heart
My soul became a giant dark cloud
So now I want you to see...this is ME!

(CHORUS)

Opening up my heart,
And setting it free.
Now you think that I love you?
No I don't!I just want to be free.

"Love Is Harsh"

Love is harsh
Love is cruel
Love is to keep you out of school

Who knew it would end up this way
At the end of every day
You led me on to a different world

All the things you said to me
I thought that they were true
But now I will be gone, see ya later

You took me into your arms
Like you loved me
But then I saw you were lying

All this time you took me out of your mind
You took me and pushed me off the edge
No problem, I'll shove myself out

This cost of love is why it hurts so much
Every kiss, every touch
It's a flashing sign

You think you know me
When you pretend
When you go far off the end

All this time I loved you
But now that isn't true
You broke my heart, you tore it into pieces

When will I ever say goodbye
When will this love ever stop
I said I loved you, but now do you love me

Love is harsh
Love is cruel
Love is never anything new

"My Heart"

my heart,my heart's fading away into the brand new day that lies ahead.
yea,ooh ooh
theres so much more to look for in life,other than love,because it always finds you.
yea,you
i opened up a secret that i never knew,but it was about you and i couldnt breathe.
because you said you didnt really loved me,you threw my heart away into a trash can of hurtful love.
there was no other way to make this pain go away,so...i make it out in song.
my sadness is going under,yea underneath the sun,and it wont stop going on,ooh!
the dedication you heard,it wasnt even a word.but you led me to it,i knew it wasnt meant to be....to be real love.

"On The Inside"

on the inside im dying!
and on the outside im crying!
but this is all because of you

time to end this now
the crying is too much pain
i cant handle it anymore!

the pain is causing my heart to break
you stole my faith away
but now i want you to know...

CHORUS:
that on the inside,im blowing up like a storm!that on the inside,my heart is being torn!you broke my heart like any other would,but you wont come back like they could.but on the inside,there's no running away!that on the inside,its always night instead of day!

the timer's running out again
for you to be foe or you to be friend
there is one last thing i have to say...(it's time to make it night or day!)

the love for you inside me is burning,
but my other side for you is turning
please dont leave me alone(with the dial tone on the phone)

this love,will it ever end?
my heart,will it ever be whole again?
you tore me up inside,it hurts so...(bad)

(CHORUS)

my inside is burning,
my heart is churning
to be free from you(to be free from love)

"Dreams Of A Dreamer"

dreamer....
i've been watching you closely
dreamer....
i know who's in your dreams
dreamer....
there is nothing you can hide from me
except one thing(one thing)
how much do you love me?

CHORUS:
out of the dreamer's dreams,and into the night!i won't give you a fright!(will i?)the passion that you are keepin' for me,i can't really see it so i opened the doors(opened up the doors) to heart so you could come inside!

there was a road
and i was walkin down the sidewalk
i heard you screech to a halt.
there was a part of me happy to see you
but another part of me,not.
i was lost in the ocean of love
crying out for you
there was an angel flying above
that told me you dont wanna be with me again

i was crying for you
i was crying and dying
dying and flying
it used to be a dream(come true)
but now its a nightmare
its not even partially a dream come true!

(CHORUS)

dreams of a dreamer...(of a dreamer,of a dreamer)
are all i have to give(have to give,have to give)
you're all i ever wanted...(ever wanted,ever wanted)
but that isn't it....
i was screaming and crying!
flying and dying for you....
all of this for you.

dreams of a dreamer,
you know just what i want.

"All These Tears That I Cry"

all this time you were
thinkin 'bout me
dreamin 'bout me
and seein me in your mind

i couldn't realize
what you were hidin inside
so i...

CHORUS:
flipped out,turned around and started to hide from you all these tears that i cry!you didnt see me,or believe in me.all you wanted was my heart to break,but i need to show you all of these tears that i cry or we may never even be anything at all!

was there something you needed to tell me?
something else to say to break my heart?
i dont know even what to say about you,
cause i dont know if your feelings are true

was there ever a message?
ever a big huge sign?
do you really love me?
or do you want to mess with my mind?

all of these choices
are not really the same
i keep hearin voices
but its you who's callin my name
so i...

(CHORUS)

all these tears that i cry!
they're only a sign for you
i dont wanna be speechless
i just wanna be with you

"My Heart"

My heart got broken
It's torn up into pieces
You were the one who caused it

I knew that you loved me
Your heart was above me
But it splashed onto the ground

The world is ending
But my love for you isn't
I want you to see that we can't be enemies

The price I payed
To make this pain go away
Was way too much to be

Now why are you pushing me around
My knees are cut
And I'm falling to the ground

The total price of endless love
Is the loss of friendship
And the loss of...us


"The Tide Is Comin' In"

the way you look at me
it brings back memories
i used to think just to hard
and went back to reality

the tide,it's rising
it's taking me under the water
the tide,it's flying
it's drowning in thunder

CHORUS:
this tide is comin' in,it's blowing up my heart again!i love you,i miss you,i always wanna be with you!it's hurting me to see the way you left me!the tide is comin' in,it's soaking up my tears again.i know i miss you,but i don't have to show it.a girl has gotta be strong!

the tide is comin' in
i am not gonna drown again
your love is keepin' me whole
it's puttin' back my soul!

the tide is flowin'
the dolphins are swimmin'
and everything in the world
is upside down and turnin'

i love you,i need you
you're all that i can think about
you hurt me,but i still love you
that's how much my love is true

(CHORUS)

the tide,it's blowing up my heart again
it wants to make me scream
i knew i shouldn't have left again
but it's only a dream

you were worth it
you held me in your arms
my heart,you broke it
but i still love you!

"The Loss Of You"

thinking of losing you
it's hurting me
i want to be with you
and you to be with me

i have no clue
of what to do
can you tell me
and i tell you

once more:i've already had this before
i'm knocking at your door
the silence is thinning
a new day is beginning!

CHORUS:
the loss of you,why can't you just stay?the loss of you,it's thinning the love in my heart every day.and you,you were what i always wanted.you are just what i need,but i just dont know how to give it up for good.

all this time,
i was misunderstood
lost inside the dark,dark wood
and you came to rescue me

love is painful
it is hurting me
on the inside and outside
oh baby cant you see?

i love you(yea yea love you)
but do you love me(oh oh oh)
i want you(yea yea i need you)
but do you want me(baby yea baby)

(CHORUS)

this heart of mine,yea
it is breaking
my soul is really overflowing
and i think i will just stick with you
(yea oh yea with you)
forever....
Edité par william_693 le 24/04/2006 à 06:17

OmG!! those are super excellente!!
i could never compare....

thanks!aw its ok

thnx partner in crime..u rock
here is another one..kinda bad..

Leave


I gave you my heart
I loved you and told you countless times
But all you did was walk away
Away from me

I turn away and walk towards the dark end of the tunnel
Leave me alone (leave)
Welcoming hurt and pain
Just leave, the last thing I need is you

Get out of my life
Relinquish from corrupting
I needed to know you loved me
All you gave me was the cold shoulder

I turn away and walk towards the dark end of the tunnel
Leave me alone (leave)
Welcoming hurt and pain
Just leave, the last thing I need is you

You never said those precious words
Stabbing me in the back
Leave my heart bleeding’
Forget you; I turn to Him for help

I turn away and walk towards the dark end of the tunnel
Leave me alone (leave)
Welcoming hurt and pain
Just leave, the last thing I need is you

I repent to Him
He cares for me
I pray
He listens
He does everything you never did

I turn away and walk towards the dark end of the tunnel
Leave me alone (leave)
Welcoming hurt and pain
Just leave, the last thing I need is you

Bridge:
Problem is resolved He fixed it, not you! (Not YOU!)



( and He/Him is God)
Edité par will4ever le 24/04/2006 à 22:42

wow thats really good!

thnx...but i still like urs way better!

WILL WILL HAS ABS THAT KILL!!!!

does that have anything to do with songs?

lol no im just random

U wrote that? omG u ARE talented!
yup, luv ur lyrix!

Although, I hope you have lyrics that's about William! I would really luv to hear it [or read it^_^]
BUT THAT'S KK!!

Ω*Ω*Ω

lol thanks!!