Narnia France

i decided to start another story cause i just love them!tell me what you think

Chapter One:Deceiving,Believing and Finding

It was a sunny summer day when I was walking home from the park with my two friends Elizabeth and Genevive.Elizabeth had fair light skin,beautiful brown eyes and silky honey blonde hair.Genevive had radiant brown skin,twinkling green eyes and black hair.I had fair skin,gorgeous blue eyes and platinum blonde hair with golden highlights.My name's Camerine Lauhter.

We arrived at my house,where a beautiful aroma filled the air as we entered my cozy little home in our elf world.It was my mother cooking lunch.My father was out back planting delicious vegetables and fruits.My sister Katherine was in the den writing her essay for our school's monthly assignment.

I entered the kitchen while my two friends went upstairs to my bedroom.I hugged my mother lightly.She was cooking chicken with corn,green beans and for dessert,rasperry truffles.

"Hello,mother." I said."Hello,dear.How was your day at the park?" I let go of her and twirled around in delight."It was wonderful!We walked around and played for a bit,then we climbed trees and fed the pigeons.How was everything here at home?" I asked."Oh,everything was fine here!Now,Camerine.I do not want you to climb trees,especially the tall ones.You must not do that,it is not how a young woman acts." She said.I frowned a bit,knowing that my mother does not approve of girls and women doing such things."Yes,mother.Thank you,mother." I said,and went on up to my room.

I opened my door,and found my friends reading and lying around.I went over and sat on my satin sheets,and laid down thinking about all that has come and gone in all these days being an elf.I turned over and looked at my King Peter poster on my ceiling.I sighed,knowing that even though he and the other king and queens have helped Narnia and my kingdom so much,that I cannot help but think that my life has been a nightmare that I cannot do what I want.

Elizabeth looked over at me,and glanced at Genevive.Elizabeth got up onto my bed and sat next to me."You know,Camerine,you cannot always get what you want.I am not saying this to be rude,but I think you might need to accept your mother's opinions and decisions.It might help you calm down a bit." She said.I looked over at her and said,"But that is what I have been doing,Elizabeth.For the past one-hundred and thirteen years,and it hasn't helped a bit!You always tell me this,and I always tend to listen to you.I have no idea why.Maybe I'll run away,and go to Narnia and tell King Peter my problems." Elizabeth and Genevive laughed at me,for making such a silly decision.Genevive spoke up finally and said,"You know,Camerine,Elizabeth is right.But maybe Narnia is right for you,too!" and they both laughed at me again.I got furious with them and said,"I can have my own dreams and decisions.I do not need you both laughing at me while I am in pain!" I screamed and climbed out my window with my bag and coat and went down my wooden ladder.They both watched me run down the street and disappear into the crouded market.

As I ran through the crowded marketplace,tears ran down my cheeks and clouds filled the air.As soon as I was almost out of the marketplace,there was a horn soundin.The horn meant for air raiders approaching.Everyone went screaming and running everywhere.I got knocked over a few times,but managed to make it out of the crowded town and marketplace.I kept of running and running and reached a wood.Up ahead was a campfire and empty tents,but they were filled with beds and armoires and wash bowls.I quietly got in one of the tents and hid under the bed.There was enough room underneath for me to roll in and out.I stayed there until nightfall when everyone,including the person who sleeps in this tent,was asleep.

I silently crept out of the tent and walked over to the camp fire,which was still lit.There was a bit of leftover food on a pan,so I ate it since I hadn't eaten since breakfast.While I was eating,I decided to go back and silently got my things out of the tent and continued walking through the woods.In the morning,I came upon two men on horses stopped on the dirt path.I looked closer and saw their profiles.The first man was a bit tall,had beautiful short blonde hair and lovely blue eyes.He was a bit older than the other man.I looked over at the other one.He had very dark brown hair,and mischevious brown eyes.They both looked like they could have been kings or princes,because of the armor they were wearing.I crept along the path they were near and walked past them silently without getting noticed since they were talking.I was almost far enough away from them when I could run again,but I tripped over a branch and fell to the ground with my knee scratched and my ankle twisted.They both heard me shriek and the older one rushed over to me and saw me lying on the ground,unconscious.He picked me up and gracefully set me on his horse and rode off.

When I awoke,I was in a bedchamber with a white and gold comforter,an armoir on my left,a balcony on my right and a fireplace in the corner.I got out of bed,and carefully walked over to the balcony.There was a view of the ocean,it was so peaceful and glistened with a sparkle just like diamonds.I opened a door and found the most beautiful bathroom I have ever seen.The walls were lined with such beautiful wallpaper,that it took my breath away.The counters were made of pure marble,and the curtains were made of pure velvet.I walked over to another door and found the closet.I nearly screamed,there were such beautiful gowns made of velvet,satin,silk,and other types of fabrics.I then saw the shoes.There were ones made with diamonds,pearls,velvet,and so many other things.I felt as if I was in Heaven.I opened one more door and found a long hallway.I started walking down the hall,when I noticed a slightly opened door.I peeked in,and saw a young girl with curls in her hair and wearing a velvet dress and silver crown.She was sitting on a bed reading a book.She looked up a bit and saw me,so I quickly ran down the hall.I ran so far,and bumped into someone.It was King Peter.I wanted to fall over,I couldn't believe my eyes."Oh,King Peter!I am so very sorry.I didn't mean to--" he interrupted and said,"It's quite alright.I wasn't watching where I was going,anyway.Did you sleep alright?" I was a bit shocked and confused by his question."What are you talking about?" He said,"Oh,you don't remember,do you?You were lying on the ground in the woods and I brought you back here,to Cair Paravel." I soon understood it very clearly.I was still a bit shocked of where I was,too actually be in a royal palace,but not fitting in at all,with my clothes and hair and shoes and the way I live.

"Oh.Yes,I do remember,now.I just was a bit shocked,and scared.I probably should be going,I don't want to intrude on you kings and queens." He said,"Oh,no.It's perfectly fine,really.I talked to the others about it and they think it's a wonderful idea.I could introduce you to them,if you want." I felt my face turn to a light pink.King Peter actually wanted me to stay here with them.I said,"Yes,that would be alright." And he took me to the grand hall,where there thrones are.
Edité par william_693 le 20/05/2006 à 12:24

WOW!!! thats gud!!

thanks!!if i feel up to it,im gonna update later kk?

ok wateva i'll be rite here watchin tv

awsome story girl!!!

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Edité par Narnia maniac le 26/05/2006 à 13:13

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waiting anxiously!!!

yes waiting and waiting and *ephisis on that and* waiting ...